Amy, it looks really good. But sometimes words repeat themselves often. You can try to say βCommunication is an important aspect of life as itβ¦β instead of saying βcommunicationβ repeatedly in different sentences. Try to connect phrases more instead of ending the sentence and starting a new one. Otherwise, itβs splendid. Too bad you didnβt write it sincerely, though.
Amy, it looks really good. But sometimes words repeat themselves often. You can try to say βCommunication is an important aspect of life as itβ¦β instead of saying βcommunicationβ repeatedly in different sentences. Try to connect phrases more instead of ending the sentence and starting a new one. Otherwise, itβs splendid. Too bad you didnβt write it sincerely, though.
if i wrote in sincerely iβd be in the guidance counselorβs office
Ξ±my
her parents found out
Daniβ‘
HI
Daniβ‘
ethan look on Docs
Anonymous
Wilkβs parents found out about WJE.
Anonymous
So she was forced to leave.
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yup
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Wade said occasionally she comments on his Youtube videos
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AYE DAGGER WSG
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been while bro
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are we chill?
Cosmologistinterntobe
y r u so accident prone
Ξ±my
mm
The Radio Demon
Scary.
Flappy.
im not
Ξ±my
heβs not <3
Heroin Monkey
Ξ±my
oh
The Radio Demon
Yummy
Flappy.
(its cuz i called u shy lmao)
Flappy.
MY FACE IS SO DRY
Heroin Monkey
Cosmologistinterntobe
hes riding that snake
The Radio Demon
The teefies aww
Anonymous
Amy, it looks really good. But sometimes words repeat themselves often. You can try to say βCommunication is an important aspect of life as itβ¦β instead of saying βcommunicationβ repeatedly in different sentences. Try to connect phrases more instead of ending the sentence and starting a new one. Otherwise, itβs splendid. Too bad you didnβt write it sincerely, though.
Cosmologistinterntobe
yeah, i would keep it more formal, and keep it more in the third person
The Radio Demon
Hmf
Cosmologistinterntobe
L
Ξ±my
if i wrote in sincerely iβd be in the guidance counselorβs office
Ξ±my
thanks for the help you guys
The Radio Demon
Thereβs a new episode in a show I watch that says itβs coming tomorrow 05:01 whyyyy
Cosmologistinterntobe
(unless the rubric said to say personal examples
Ξ±my
yeah it did
Ξ±my
itβs supposed to have a personal tone
Cosmologistinterntobe
ok
Cosmologistinterntobe
i hate those types of essays
Cosmologistinterntobe
I would also work a bit on transitions
Cosmologistinterntobe
those are pretty important
Cosmologistinterntobe
its still pretty good, tho
Anonymous
I see.
Anonymous
Identify the issues that impede your happiness and see what you can do.
Ξ±my
not much lmfao
Anonymous
I miss wilk )):
The Unknown King of Moderation
Donβt have that mindset! Thereβs a lot you can do, you just gotta find it!
Ξ±my
wait daggy waggy come back
Heroin Monkey
simp
Wade XL
My lil burrito :(
Sooploosh MacSchnibble
hiii =3
Anonymous
Yes?
im with stupid 5.0
ethan
typical
heeeeeey