Story Idea: Mental Asylum Doctor's Journal

Should I write a story bout the work journal of a mental asylum doctors with everything that happens with her 7 insane clients?

Yes.
86 %
No.
14 %
7 votes Β· Final results

Comments (235)

Don’t want it to be too spread out, maybe focus on one specific client, or maybe how his insane clients make his work difficult or what the tests do to them.

Anonymous

Don’t want it to be too spread out, maybe focus on one specific client, or maybe how his insane clients make his work difficult or what the tests do to them.

let me get deeper into detail

You should make the clients try to GANG-RAPE her or something

Every year this spriti ruins anywhere from 5-30 relationships.

Right, vulnerable people too. any relationship with family or anything

and puts thoughts in there head

makes them wanna hurt themself

some want to kill them selves

and then this book is based on the doctor finding out Abt the spirit

and then it being too late cause her 7 clients have all found aw at to end their lives

so I kinda need a book for it all

its based around what the clients think

and what the clients say and do

I’m too spedo to comprehend all that

You should leak us the ending

rapboat

You should leak us the ending

They all die, and sense the doctroe knws the reason why was driven insane

from not being able to save them

What happens to the spirit?

You should make the doctor give his soul to the spirit for some kind of ability/gift

I bet the spirit is what ruined TAYLOR SWIFT’S 50 shitty relationships

Anonymous

You should make the doctor give his soul to the spirit for some kind of ability/gift

the spirit is out to ruin everything it can and driving people insane to the point of suidice.

The doctor should make a trade

Anonymous

The doctor should make a trade

Why? For?

I mean if they’re insane they could bargain their soul for something but yea just an idea

I don't think so.. cause the spirit has been doing this

Like making a deal with the devil

the doctor has no reason to

Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing

Kinda clishe to sell your soul

rapboat

Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing

No.

rapboat

Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing

Bro wut

Anonymous

No.

Damn I thought that was a fire backstory

Anonymous

What if he does πŸ€”

witch would be?

rapboat

Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing

Helluva boss?

rapboat

Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing

"a" cupid?

There are multiple cupids real?

Flappy.

"a" cupid?

Yeah, so now instead of CAUSING relationships, he RUINS them

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I know

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Yum you should make a story about an incubus in human form who films his sex to blackmail people into giving him their blood

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STOP BEING FORCEFULL

That’s what she said

I’ll make the introduction to the soldier story

&& then MAYBE think abt that

Is an incubus an evil demon? Or a lust demon?

I don't think I'm good at writing stories.

Do you know what a succubus is?

Anonymous

I don't think I'm good at writing stories.

Not gonna cap, you should give perv and I the password

rapboat

Not gonna cap, you should give perv and I the password

Defently not you.

Anonymous

I don't think I'm good at writing stories.

You can think that but I disagree && so do other people

You would just yap abt rap.

Anonymous

Defently not you.

Why just him? Think I can write?

Anonymous

You would just yap abt rap.

I might post a FEW non-rap stuff

Anonymous

Why just him? Think I can write?

No, but if you wanted it you have reat story ideas, witch lead to good stories.

rapboat

I might post a FEW non-rap stuff

Nope, no rap.

Anonymous

Nope, no rap.

I like the idea of RAP-WEEKENDS, where we only write about rap

Rapboat you should make a biography about eminem

Drake got caught edging to the ice spice leak

Anonymous

Rapboat you should make a biography about eminem

Bet

Anonymous

Drake got caught edging to the ice spice leak

Monkey+orangitan

How are you gonna introduce the story?

There’s literally no point being here anymore

Except telling u the intro but I’ll do that later

Yum Myan

I love you May

I love you too

I keep leaking cold water on myself

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I am re-writing my stories on doc.

Now that I am sharing them, I kinda hate them..

What do you think dish tasted like before women started swimming

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Anonymous

cosmo

I wrote an Eminem biography

Post it on the stor account

what type of advice do u want

Okay so, I write my stories

I let people irl read them.

The second I re-write them, knowing more and anyone can see it.

like copy it down online or a doc

I think its at a bad leval.

I think its not detailed enough

I think its not entertaining

I think I could do better, but when I try this is the best I can do.

hold on. can u make a copy of one of ur recent stories (make sure to turn on permissions) , and send it to me via quotev

I am copying a story I'm working on rn

I'm not putting editer I'm putting commenter js so I can see

so far, it looks pretty good, other than a few spelling and grammar errorss

I get it; maybe more imagery inbetween actions could help idk

Anonymous

so far, it looks pretty good, other than a few spelling and grammar errorss

I'm gonna write it later

Watching the lord of the flies movie && doing this weird assignment

I’m alsmost doen πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

Yum Myan

Watching the lord of the flies movie && doing this weird assignment

read that book

We are; I’m on chapter 8

I’ll finish soon tho

fix my Grammer nd shit in my story

I'ma go eat nd do the dishes