Story introduction.
Is it all a dream? Charlie Knight ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I remember when I first died. I have no idea how this dream became a reality. Is it a reality? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I was running.. From what? It was hard to remember. Struggling, I kept running. Soon the hall came to an end. Quickly, I ran into a room, diving under a hospital bed. As I closed my eyes, I wondered “is this real? Is this it?” I hear the door open, I know it's here. Eyes still closed i feel its cold hands grab me, i open my eyes to see rows and rows of teeth, then nothing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Is this it?” I ask myself. “Do people really die in their nightmares?”
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Yum Myan
Oh my god that’s amazing! Some simple grammar stuff like capitalization would be nice but other then that I like how urgent the narrator
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Anonymous
Dude.
Anonymous
Stop.
Anonymous
I take writing to seriously for bs.
Anonymous
No
Anonymous
Charlie, this is horror right?
Anonymous
Going to be..
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Do you have my brother on anything?
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no?
Anonymous
I don't speak to him
Anonymous
He likes writing stories and is basically in love with horror
Anonymous
Do you have discord?
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He has that?
Anonymous
I dnt want to speak to him Serena.
Anonymous
Why not?
Anonymous
It's not like he can hurt yoy
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Have you seen him?
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Yes
Anonymous
He annoys me, I don't like talking to most people, my cirlce if small, Id rather go to less people with my stroeis and what I like Abt them unless ik the writing habits and skills.
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How so?
Anonymous
How so what?
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Is he annoying to yoy
Anonymous
He's too.. hyper.
Anonymous
...so are you
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I know.
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I just.. am not to found of him
Anonymous
And he has autism. Give him a break gosh
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Lol
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ok
Anonymous
Funny story about him. He would ram his head into the wall when nobone could understand him
Anonymous
He also spoke gibberish
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Ok
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Bad
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I love it
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Especially where you say It was so hard
Anonymous
uh?
Wade
Ungh
Wade
Lol