Is This a Good Song?

  • Is this a good song? (I wrote it)

    It would be heaven We were born and raised All the damn time I never wanted anyone like this

    Yeah Let’s not pretend like you’re alone tonight I love you more than a billion stars I feel a little unsteady

    Every night In a summer haze Your smile your personality Past the places where you used to learn

    Yeah That’s all I’ve ever been I love you more than a billion stars That’s all I’ve ever been

    Comments (11)

  • Do i need to make adjustments to the lyrics?

    Thanks, but why do I feel like you're being sarcastic.

    it looks sarcastic to me also

    Thanks. Also thank you for not being sarcastic.

    Magnanimous Eland