Should I write a story bout the work journal of a mental asylum doctors with everything that happens with her 7 insane clients?
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Yum Myan
7 for a single book?
Lovely Perv
Donβt want it to be too spread out, maybe focus on one specific client, or maybe how his insane clients make his work difficult or what the tests do to them.
Yum Myan
I agree
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Donβt want it to be too spread out, maybe focus on one specific client, or maybe how his insane clients make his work difficult or what the tests do to them.
let me get deeper into detail
RapBoat
You should make the clients try to GANG-RAPE her or something
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Every year this spriti ruins anywhere from 5-30 relationships.
Yum Myan
Oh
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Right, vulnerable people too. any relationship with family or anything
RapBoat
Reverse cupid?
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and puts thoughts in there head
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makes them wanna hurt themself
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some want to kill them selves
Lovely Perv
Satan
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and then this book is based on the doctor finding out Abt the spirit
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and then it being too late cause her 7 clients have all found aw at to end their lives
Lovely Perv
π€ creative idea
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so I kinda need a book for it all
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its based around what the clients think
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and what the clients say and do
Lovely Perv
Iβm too spedo to comprehend all that
RapBoat
You should leak us the ending
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You should leak us the ending
They all die, and sense the doctroe knws the reason why was driven insane
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from not being able to save them
RapBoat
What happens to the spirit?
Yum Myan
Let loose?
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Its still here.
Lovely Perv
You should make the doctor give his soul to the spirit for some kind of ability/gift
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Sprit is still there
RapBoat
I bet the spirit is what ruined TAYLOR SWIFTβS 50 shitty relationships
Yum Myan
Real
Lovely Perv
nah just her
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You should make the doctor give his soul to the spirit for some kind of ability/gift
the spirit is out to ruin everything it can and driving people insane to the point of suidice.
Lovely Perv
Yeah.
Lovely Perv
The doctor should make a trade
Lovely Perv
Ethan fruity
Lovely Perv
Idk, just an idea
Yum Myan
I mean if theyβre insane they could bargain their soul for something but yea just an idea
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I AM NOT FRUITY
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I don't think so.. cause the spirit has been doing this
Lovely Perv
Like making a deal with the devil
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the doctor has no reason to
RapBoat
Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing
Lovely Perv
What if he does π€
Yum Myan
Kinda clishe to sell your soul
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Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing
No.
Lovely Perv
Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing
Bro wut
Yum Myan
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Lovely Perv
Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing
Helluva boss?
Flappy.
Maybe the spirit used to be a CUPID, but then joined Satan in the whole demon-rebellion bible thing
"a" cupid?
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are you at school
Yum Myan
There are multiple cupids real?
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yes i am chxl
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GET ELI ON PLEASPELASPELAPSLEAPSLEAPSLEAEE
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I CANT I IANT IN HIS CLASS BRU
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WOMP WOMP I CANT
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STOP BEING FORCEFULL
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GRRRRRRRRRRRRR
Lovely Perv
Yum you should make a story about an incubus in human form who films his sex to blackmail people into giving him their blood
Yum Myan
π¨
Yum Myan
An incubus?
Yum Myan
Iβll make the introduction to the soldier story
Yum Myan
&& then MAYBE think abt that
Yum Myan
Cuz
Yum Myan
Is an incubus an evil demon? Or a lust demon?
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I don't think I'm good at writing stories.
Lovely Perv
Do you know what a succubus is?
RapBoat
I don't think I'm good at writing stories.
Not gonna cap, you should give perv and I the password
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Not gonna cap, you should give perv and I the password
Defently not you.
Yum Myan
I don't think I'm good at writing stories.
You can think that but I disagree && so do other people
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You would just yap abt rap.
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Why just him? Think I can write?
No, but if you wanted it you have reat story ideas, witch lead to good stories.
Lovely Perv
Rapboat you should make a biography about eminem
Anonymous
Drake got caught edging to the ice spice leak
Lovely Perv
Call him up rn
Ξ±my
what the fuck
Anonymous
AUGH DADDY
Yum Myan
Nah
Lovely Perv
How are you gonna introduce the story?
Yum Myan
Me?
Yum Myan
Oh ok
Yum Myan
WELL
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I'm leaveing.
Lovely Perv
Goodbye!
Yum Myan
Noo :(
Yum Myan
Wellβ¦
Yum Myan
Thereβs literally no point being here anymore
Yum Myan
Except telling u the intro but Iβll do that later
Yum Myan
Iβm leaving too
Yum Myan
See yall later
Yum Myan
Maybe
Yum Myan
I love you May
Anonymous
Takin a shit rn
Lovely Perv
I keep leaking cold water on myself
Lovely Perv
IT BURNS!!!
Lovely Perv
lol
Anonymous
My asshole burns
Anonymous
Ppchpppppchppppchpppppch
Anonymous
Bruh
Anonymous
My pee is red
Anonymous
Level 10 womp
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Ohio final boss
Anonymous
ππ³οΈif thereβs a hole thereβs a goal
Anonymous
ππππ
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I am re-writing my stories on doc.
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Now that I am sharing them, I kinda hate them..
Anonymous
What do you think dish tasted like before women started swimming
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THT MAKES ALOT OF SENSE
Anonymous
*fish
RapBoat
Post it on the stor account
RapBoat
Why not
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can I have advice?
CosmoIogist interntobe
what type of advice do u want
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Okay so, I write my stories
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I read them.
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I let people irl read them.
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The second I re-write them, knowing more and anyone can see it.
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like copy it down online or a doc
CosmoIogist interntobe
but why do you hate them?
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I think its at a bad leval.
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I think its not detailed enough
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I think its not entertaining
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I think I could do better, but when I try this is the best I can do.
CosmoIogist interntobe
hold on. can u make a copy of one of ur recent stories (make sure to turn on permissions) , and send it to me via quotev
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I am copying a story I'm working on rn
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I'm not putting editer I'm putting commenter js so I can see
CosmoIogist interntobe
thats what I wanted
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I'ma write on it though
CosmoIogist interntobe
so far, it looks pretty good, other than a few spelling and grammar errorss
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please ix those
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I try to do my best but
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I'm not good at it
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I'm still writing
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I js feel like its boring
Yum Myan
I get it; maybe more imagery inbetween actions could help idk
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so far, it looks pretty good, other than a few spelling and grammar errorss
I'm gonna write it later
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I want food so I'ma eat
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then I hv to do dishes
Yum Myan
Makes sense
Yum Myan
In English class rn
Yum Myan
Watching the lord of the flies movie && doing this weird assignment
Yum Myan
Too easy tho so
Yum Myan
Iβm alsmost doen π₯³π₯³
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Watching the lord of the flies movie && doing this weird assignment
read that book
Yum Myan
We are; Iβm on chapter 8
Yum Myan
I read ahead
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I finished it
Yum Myan
Loll
Yum Myan
Iβll finish soon tho
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I'm advanced ela
Yum Myan
Nice!
Yum Myan
We love that
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fix my Grammer nd shit in my story
Yum Myan
Will do
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u hv the link on q
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I'ma go eat nd do the dishes
Yum Myan
Thank youu
Yum Myan
Alrighty
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WHO IS ON WJE LOUNG
Jazzyπ
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Lovely Perv
Yes and no